People are not paying attention to environmental protection What is the cause and suggest solutions to deal with this issue

Protecting of environment is not considered crucial enough by human beings. This situation is related to lack of knowledge about negative consequences in future and government support; however, it could be solved by some measurements.

One of the primary reasons for few attentions to the protection of the environment is people's ignorance. Most of them are not able to understand that the consumption of the nature is not unlimited, and nobody cares about the environment, future generation will suffer from various diseases, air or water pollution and global warming. Meanwhile, most of countries are interested only economic benefits, and they do not provide quite infrastructure to prevent infringements. For instance, there are not array of rubbish boxes in every street accordingly.

One way to tackle the problems aforementioned is to increase the level of education among the people. The importance of environmental protection should have delivered them from their primary school years. According to the researched carried by Oxford University, there are strong correlation with the people who are educated or not. Educated people are more sensitive for maintenance of their environment. In addition to this, governments must strengthen the regulation about the protection of the environment. Prohibitions might be increased slightly and implementation of the punishments, such as fines must executed against for the ones who violate the rules.

In conclusion, the main important factors behind the protection of environment are lack of knowledge and government support. Despite these, it could be overcomed by providing educative explanations to people and implement immediate punishments based on the regulations related to environment.

Votes
Average: 5.9 (3 votes)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 346, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the countries') or simply say ''most countries''.
Suggestion: most of the countries; most countries
...ollution and global warming. Meanwhile, most of countries are interested only economic benefits, ...
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Line 5, column 281, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'correlations'?
Suggestion: correlations
... by Oxford University, there are strong correlation with the people who are educated or not...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, however, so, then, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 27.0 8.3376753507 324% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.72796934866 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28505577318 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605363984674 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1403769094 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.785714286 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6428571429 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171139364992 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602842524596 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533619020173 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0952734375506 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336392397485 0.056905535591 59% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.95 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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