People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example,new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge).Why do you think people attend college or university?

Essay topics:

People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example,
new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge).
Why do you think people attend college or university?

The past 50 years have seen a considerable increase in the number of high school graduates attending university or college. In this essay, I intend to examine the reasons associated to this trend. Three of the primary reasons are as follows.
One point that I think to be absolutely pivotal is that university graduates place more profound impression on recruiters than ones who just finish high school. Nowadays, academic qualification is one of the major factors required by employers. Applications of candidates with Bachelor’s degree or higher education may draw more attention of job seekers and these applicants are more likely to achieve the position that they applied for.

Equally importantly, though, going to university offers young people an opportunity for career preparation. During the undergraduate course, students are theoretically prepared and fully equipped with skills and knowledge which serve the future career. They are also provided with a period of probation to get used to and obtain a real insight into a specific job. By this way, they are also able to enrich their knowledge and broaden their horizons.

Last but not least, it is undeniable fact that university life assists young adults in gaining real world experience. Entering university or college means that they are in a totally unfamiliar environment, no longer surrounded by friends who share ups and downs but people from all walks of life and all parts of country. They may be in a state of shock; they, however, after this stage, being with people who share the same interests and dreams, gradually, may motivate them to be on track and achieve long-term success. Moreover, students may build their independent nature during their university life. Some have to separate from their family and move to another city for study. As result, they have to learn to manage on their own, take care of themselves and make their own decisions without their beloved family members always nearby, although they may struggle to adapt in the first instance.

By the way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm that there are various reasons why people choose to enter university and three aspects mentioned above contributes to the key factors causing this phenomenon.

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Equally,
...the position that they applied for. Equally importantly, though, going to universit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, i think, by the way

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1895.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20604395604 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75533289765 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60989010989 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4172016362 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.470588235 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4117647059 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05882352941 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206991803651 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0611345711767 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594367141548 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10992786351 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293807821489 0.056905535591 52% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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