People say that the main environmental problem of our time is loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that their are more important environmental problems.
Discuss both sides and give a concluding view.
In recent times, human existence has been threatened by a plethora of climatic crises. But which one of this crises should be considered more significant? While some argue that loss of biodiversity is a more crucial eco-unfriendly disaster, others however claim that issues such as global warming, air pollution and water pollution are more threatening. This essay will discuss both views and give an opinion subsequently.
To start with, the population of plant and animal species are declining with the speed of light, and this is bothersome to all and sundry. This sheer fact perhaps, is the reason why proponents of the view that loss of biodiversity is a more sinister climatic mishap have maintained their stand over the years. They cited the pernicious effects of human activities such as deforestation, over fishing and excessive use of fertilizers and herbicides for farming, as the culprits of this trend. As a result of the dwindling flora and fauna lives, human life have been negatively affected since we depend on the atmospheric carbon dioxide mopping effect of these plants as well as the dietary benefits of both the plants and animal species for survival.
On the other hand, opponents of the claim that the loss of plants and animal species weigh more than other ecological problems , believe that more threatening disasters abound. To buttress their point, they affirmed that issues like global warming, air pollution and water pollution rank higher than loss of biodiversity. According to the United Nation health statistics, the ever increasing global temperature has increased the incidence of conditions such as heat stroke and heat exhaustion in tropical countries. Also, the spewing into the air, microscopic dust and soot from power plants, tail pipes and wildfires is an invisible killer. For example, in a survey done in 2019 by the Environmental Protection Agency in Accra Ghana, more than 30,000 deaths in a single year was attributed to air pollution.
In conclusion, regardless of the contrasting opinions , all the above mentioned climatic disasters are inimical to human existence. I opine that they are all equally significant. If their impacts are seen as commensurable, it would eliminate the bias that could arise in choosing which one of them is to be tackled or ignored.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1946.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21715817694 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86575985657 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584450402145 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 603.9 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2516920819 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.625 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3125 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4375 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19511335413 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539191936901 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634874931464 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0997177084857 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501186809886 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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