Pollution of rivers lakes and seas is a major concern for people who seek to protect the environment What are the possible causes of water pollution and what effects does this have on animal life and human society Give reasons for your answer and include

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Pollution of rivers, lakes and seas is a major concern for people who seek to protect the environment.

What are the possible causes of water pollution, and what effects does this have on animal life and human society?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Water is essential for every life forms that exists on the the planet. Many societies have developed by surrounding water bodies like seas, rivers or lakes. But now these water bodies are becoming polluted by the people. There is no doubt that pollution of water will eventually lead to disasterous outcomes. As many industries are throwing their toxic garbages in the nearby lakes or rivers, the environment is being polluted. As a result, many species of fish and other aquatic animals have either become extinct or relocated to deeper sea areas to avoid human contact. In some cases, people are drinking the polluted water and contracting different types of infection in the process.

There are a few industries which are being constructed near water bodies and they are choosing to dissipate their wastes products in them. As a consequence, the water bodies become polluted with the toxic ingredients and unfit for human and animal consumption. Diseases like cholera or diarrhea becomes pandemic in communities which are dependent on the polluted water sources. Moreover, when farmers use pesticides or fertilizers in their crop fields, the chemicals may get washed out to nearing rivers or lakes by rain water. These chemicals make the water in the rivers or lakes toxic and so rearing fish in them becomes impossible.

Although oceans do not has to suffer similar type of pollution, oil extraction may cause serious damage to the sea creatures. An oil spilage incident in the sea near Coasta Rica had resulted in the death of atleast hundread sea animals including whales. In addition, plastics and microplastics which are thrown in the rivers get carried out to the sea levels and often created issues with the sea dependent animals. For instances, sea turtles and jelly fish are the prime target of the plastic pollution.

To conclude, water pollution badly affects the life of every living thing on earth so the government of every country should come forward and try to solve the problem as one.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, moreover, so, as to, for instance, in addition, no doubt, as a result, in some cases

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1683.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06927710843 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59438430968 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560240963855 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.2017438026 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5294117647 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76470588235 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266701990991 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856362382173 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375330431448 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146934757823 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603937714554 0.056905535591 106% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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