Popular events like the Football World Cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tension and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way.
Every four year, the whole world stops to watch the sporting events like Olympics and the football world cup, in which the athletes from all countries try to show their best performance to make their country proud. These sporting events were so helpful to reduce the international tensions where powerful leaders try to control the world economy and while some countries fighting over the land.
These sporting events are the best examples which prove that how these occasions can bring the nations together. In the ancient history, the Roman and Greeks would stop battles and participate in these games, even to the more recent disputes, in which the player of Palestine and Israel played together and forget their disputes and embrace each other after the game. Moreover these events bring the world attention to the terrible consequences of wars, thus world leaders reach to agreement to stop war and live peacefully.
These sporting events show benefits in the developing countries, which lives in civil wars. Take an example of brazil which has a high rate of crime, lack of education, hunger and poverty, which bring a immense embracement of being a Brazilian and a low self-esteem. The Brazilian squad which is considered to be the best in the world, provokes an amazing feeling of proud in their country. When the football world cup starts, the crime rate in Brazil decreases. They paint their streets and wear Brazil flag t-shirt and buy their national Flags. People forgets their problems and neighbor sit together, even the rivals gangs celebrate and live peacefully.
In conclusion, popular sporting events play an important role in decreasing international tensions and liberating patriotic feeling as history has shown.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 369, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
... and embrace each other after the game. Moreover these events bring the world attention ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 202, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...cation, hunger and poverty, which bring a immense embracement of being a Brazilia...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, so, thus, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21708185053 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52658011889 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580071174377 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1446532275 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.166666667 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4166666667 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217671847685 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817548931725 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742515103349 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15414265707 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0761231124145 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.