Popular events like the football world cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and with relevant evidence.
Big sporting events such as the FIFA World Cup and the Olympics have been attributed to relieve international tensions amongst countries, in addition, they also serve as a proper venue to exhibit patriotism. I somewhat agree with this statement, although it has been known to gather people together in support of their home countries, there are instances when fights brake out in stadiums and other venues.
On one hand, occasions such as the World Cup draw massive numbers of supporters cheering for their home countries. Thus, exhibiting a strong sense of pride and nationalism. Furthermore, events like the Olympics alleviate international and domestic rifts between nations. Case in point, the two Koreas which are still technically at war, yet in time of the Olympics, differences are set aside and both countries would march under one flag, as seen on the most recent Olympics in Brazil. Sporting events such as these do play a vital role in keeping a balance to a volatile world.
On the other hand, unfortunate events are bound to happen when rabid fans loose their cool and tempers rose. Riots are common to football matches, especially when rival teams are playing. Fans would sometimes go overboard when they think that calls are not being made, as they can verbally attack the referees or opposing supporters worst physical altercations can break loose. Moreover, the Munich Olympics in 1972, when Jewish athletes were murdered by Syrian terrorists. The incident paved the way for Israel to retaliate, although in complete discretion, as they hunted all proprietors in the massacre.
In conclusion, Sporting events such as the Olympics and the World Cup do have their fair share of advantages and disadvantages that I somewhat adhere to.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
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Suggestion: supporters the worst
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, thus, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17192982456 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7249313471 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.14464926 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.384615385 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9230769231 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176589337334 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0589373768899 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533774357532 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113306841799 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458658207004 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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