With regard to the population of many countries around the world, it is now increasingly more common for a lot of nations to have a large number of young people and a lower figure of the elderly citizens. In this essay, I would like to identify both the advantages and disadvantages of this change and provide my personal conclusion.
To begin with, it is a matter of fact that young adults, who will have more time to contribute their effort to their country, will become the main workforce. To be more specific, they will take the main repsonsibility to carry out many scientific researches and start up their own businesses, which can help to develop the economy and society in their country in a better way. Secondly, it is also clear that, in many countries especially developing countries, having a large percentage of young labour is their competitive edge to attract more economic investments from many different multi-national companies. In particular, these investments can certainly create a lot of jobs for the local citizens, which can help them to earn money and improve their lives.
Turning to the other side of this argument, it should also be borne in mind that, the governments can face with enormous financial difficulties if they have to spend a lot of money maintaining and providing the welfare for young citizens for many years. Moreover, it is also true that, the number of young adults can exceed the capacity of many urban infrastructures such as public transport, university and hospital. For example, in Ho Chi Minh city, which is the biggest city in Vietnam, because there are too much private vehicles used to commnute by young people, it usually leads to the terrible traffic congestion every afternoon in this city.
In conclusion, I personally believe that although this change of population can have some negative impact on the economy and society in some countries, the advantages of this change still overweigh the disadvantages.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 131, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ore common for a lot of nations to have a large number of young people and a lower figure of the ...
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Line 2, column 572, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
... attract more economic investments from many different multi-national companies. In particular...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, for example, in conclusion, in particular, such as, to begin with, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01219512195 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87649813539 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560975609756 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.2646246723 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 164.4 106.682146367 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.8 20.7667163134 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5 7.06120827912 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192465450688 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0795912324762 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057669123929 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135046522808 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695648358493 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.0946893788 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.37 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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