By punishing murderers with the death penalty, society is also guilty of committing murder. Therefore, life in prison is a better punishment for murderers. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
The life imprisonment is the most effective method of punishment than capital punishment. In my opinion, I agree with this statement because of the financial, the possible safety reasons and the appeal.
The costs involving life imprisonment are cheaper than capital punishment. The costs of carrying out a death sentence is more than the life imprisonment, because criminals are carrying out endless appeals to delay the procedures and takes up a lot of times. In California, for instance, spent more than $117 million each year to maintain and procedure of a death penalty compared to $2.34 million for life in sentences. Therefore, life sentences are better than the death penalty for the cost effective reasons.
Moreover life sentences are the best approaches for providing safety to the public. Life without the possibility of parole is an alternative to capital punishment that addresses our need for public safety. Almost 9 out of 10 responses that life in prison without parole feels secure than that of capital punishment. Hence, by putting criminals in prison can provide some safe measure for public.
In my opinion, despite all those reasons, the most beneficial point for life in prison is the possible appeals. For example, the prisoner had locked up in cells for murdering 7 years old girl in 2000 in California. He was finally able to release from the cells with innocent guilty of murder cases after 16 years of persistent appeals. If he had sentenced for death penalty, the society would commit a crime of killing an innocent man. Therefore, life imprisonment is the best approach to provide the second chance for murderers.
In conclusion, the death penalty can be seen as the violation of criminal act of killing a person and possibility of killing an innocent person. Therefore, life imprisonment is the better punishment for murderers for its cost effective and public safety reasons.
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Discourse Markers used:
['finally', 'hence', 'if', 'moreover', 'second', 'so', 'therefore', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.30029154519 0.247107183377 122% => OK
Verbs: 0.116618075802 0.155533422707 75% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0932944606414 0.0946595960268 99% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0145772594752 0.0501214627716 29% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0204081632653 0.0437548338989 47% => OK
Prepositions: 0.166180758017 0.122226691241 136% => OK
Participles: 0.0379008746356 0.0403226058552 94% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.80652124038 2.80594681477 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0204081632653 0.0326793684256 62% => OK
Particles: 0.0116618075802 0.00163938923432 711% => OK
Determiners: 0.107871720117 0.0861772015684 125% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00874635568513 0.021408717616 41% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00583090379009 0.011925033212 49% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1908.0 1933.35771543 99% => OK
No of words: 312.0 316.048096192 99% => OK
Chars per words: 6.11538461538 6.12580529183 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20517956788 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.400641025641 0.374742101984 107% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.323717948718 0.28420135186 114% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.217948717949 0.203846283523 107% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.144230769231 0.137316102897 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80652124038 2.80594681477 100% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.037074148 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.49358974359 0.56093040696 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 49.5295098048 60.7387585426 82% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0891783567 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.3529411765 20.7743622355 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.7493726354 49.517814964 56% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.235294118 127.492653851 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3529411765 20.7743622355 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.647058823529 0.814263465372 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 50.7247360483 49.1944974215 103% => OK
Elegance: 3.32692307692 1.69124875643 197% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.397578054361 0.332605444948 120% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.155097030084 0.102741220458 151% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0948324916615 0.0668466124924 142% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.572659617612 0.534860350844 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.112410760432 0.148594505496 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161866440814 0.134430193775 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514137459915 0.0742795772207 69% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.382022073929 0.324371583561 118% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0350372533555 0.0638462369009 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260865960425 0.228012699653 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384247243605 0.058150111329 66% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.68436873747 46% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41683366733 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 1.0 5.90881763527 17% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.5751503006 233% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 7.0 10.4468937876 67% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.