In recent years children have been given more freedom than in the past.
Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
It is noticeable that young generations have been given more freedom than in the past in recent years, raising many questions of its significant impacts on young people’ future. Although the disadvantages associated with could be pronounced, this pattern culminates in more negative consequences.
On the one hand, It should be acknowledged that this trend could be fraught with pitfalls, hampering children’s development. Giving children the autonomy without proper parental guidance means higher possibilities that their mind could be contaminated by their outside forces, reshaping their perceptions of the society. For example, young people could freely get access to violent and X-rated materials without the parental supervision, leading to some impairments in their mental health.Therefore, the likelihood of breeding the future offenders is inevitable.
On the other hand, there are many positive impacts when it comes to children getting more freedom. First, Children would be given more discretion to experience the outside world and assimilate into the society. This acts as an incentive for their acquisition of life experience and especially independent skill, which are proved to the key to any individual’s success in the future. In addition, children could choose their lifestyle based on their personal preferences without being affected by the traditional beliefs and prejudices from the older ones. For instance, homosexual male children could express their true sexual orientation and personalities with no fear of old gender-role perceptions from old generations like those in the past.
In conclusion, it is highly recommended that children should be given more autonomy for some advantages of life quality enhancement and free lifestyle. However, young children should discourage some negative factors which could perchance lead them to the path of crime commissions.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 495, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
...some impairments in their mental health.Therefore, the likelihood of breeding the future ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.82206405694 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16532789256 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590747330961 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2625929231 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.333333333 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4166666667 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.91666666667 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207272123493 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.08375546862 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687614338905 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142701066825 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0877758613424 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.77 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.0 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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