Recently, there has been a rapid rise in the divorce rate among the young.Discuss the key factors that might increase the rate of divorce in modern society.

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Recently, there has been a rapid rise in the divorce rate among the young.
Discuss the key factors that might increase the rate of divorce in modern society.

In the recent era, the divorce rate has been raised to a great extent. Many reasons have been laid behind this jump in the number of cases which people put an end to their marriage.
First of all, today, laws have been changed dramatically and it is easier for couples to get a divorce. To elaborate on it, in the past, there used to be an adequate justification for the separation, such as, intoxication, adultery, cruelty, etc. However, these days, couples get divorced if they are not happy with their relationships and also, the process of getting a divorce is not as difficult as it was in the past. Moreover, in modern societies it is completely acceptable if a person has got a divorce, whereas, previously, that was a taboo and people could not remarry easily.
Furthermore, these days, spouses are less dependent on each other and this condition paves the way for a marriage to end in divorce. In fact, in the past, men were the integral breadwinners in every houses and in turn, women were more submissive and subjugated. Another perspective which merits attention is that today, life is so complicated and people are less satisfied and cheerful owing to the problems that they are coping with. To be more precise, some issues such as air pollution, traffic jam, unemployment, low income, etc. affect the standards of people’s lives tremendously. Hence, couples have lower tolerance in their lives and split up with each other straightforwardly.
To sum up, these days, many problems ignite the thought of divorce in the mind of couples and some new circumstances have made it more possible for people to come to this tragic decision.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, whereas, in fact, such as, first of all, to sum up, to a great extent

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8896797153 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86815078534 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572953736655 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2768959595 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.692307692 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6153846154 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92307692308 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0953920594631 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0371379595501 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662476847159 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0702746263074 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553984536648 0.056905535591 97% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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