As a result of advances in medical care, average life expectancy is increasing for men and women. Do you think most people will see this as a positive development? What are the disadvantages of an ageing population for individuals and society? Support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience or observations.
Researchers have shown that average life of the human being has been increased dramatically from last few years. This increase in life expectancy is obviously due to modern equipments used in the medical care. Of course, everyone wants to live longer to enjoy life and so, this advancement is considered as positive by most of the people on the earth. However, this drift has caused some adverse effects on the individuals as well as society.
Throughout the history, it has been seen that immortality has been considered as the blessing from the God. Everyone wants to live more to spend some more years with their loved ones. Due to this greed of longer life, most of the people on the earth consider advancement in the medical science positive. Apart from this, at the social level, people feel that more aged people would benefit the organization or the government because of their knowledge and experience. For example, senior employees would guide the juniors under them to work better.
Nevertheless, increase in the aged population has adversely impacted the society as well as the individual. Firstly, owing to large aged population, the government has to do more expenditure on medical care and pension of the senior citizen. This will increase the burden on the regime. Secondly, youth have to work more and pay extra tax for this extra expense. Lastly, an increase in the population also causes the detrimental effects on the environment as well.
To sum up, it individually, everyone would consider modern technology as a blessing for the human race as it gives more years to live. But at the same time, it has negative impacts on individual, society and environment as a whole.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, well, apart from, as to, for example, of course, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99647887324 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72068740439 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521126760563 0.561755894193 93% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.5962601357 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.6875 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.625 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271048407341 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0871508567426 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555968518437 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157223168711 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0720115227171 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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