The rise of convenience food has helped people keep up with the speed of modern life.
Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
It is undoubtedly true that the modern living is increasingly heading in a fast pace stage. While the existence of the fast foods made life easier, I believe that it has some serious drawbacks to consider. It is agreed that the disadvantages of obesity-related diseases outweigh advantages of effortless food preparation as it will be discussed.
The prime advantage of the easily ready to eat foods is the time essence. Since most of the people are working or engage in some activities, relying on ready cook foods will make them manage their time effectively. For example, in the recent survey at the University of Brisbane, respondents who are mostly students in the higher years at the university, agreed that an enormous amount of time was saved by simply consuming foods available in the fast food chains. In contrast, if the student will cook every meal for themselves, the time that they can be devoted to studying will be lessened.
The main disadvantage of fast foods recipe is its nutritional content. The reason for this is that majority of convenience foods which is offered by most restaurants have a high content of fats. This unwanted bad cholesterol in the body will not be burned and will possibly cause obesity especially for the younger generation. For instance, in the research study at Medical Hospital of Canada claimed that 80% of the patients who are at a high risk of the chronic diseases like diabetes and heart disease are consuming a great amount of fast food. This is clearly evident that the long-term consumption of fast foods will lead to a very serious medical conditions in the future.
In conclusion, the disadvantages of a severe medical condition for long time consumption of fast foods outweigh the advantage of less effort in the preparation of food.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 31, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'foods'' or 'food's'?
Suggestion: foods'; food's
...ened. The main disadvantage of fast foods recipe is its nutritional content. The ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'so', 'while', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'in contrast']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.255384615385 0.247107183377 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.138461538462 0.155533422707 89% => OK
Adjectives: 0.12 0.0946595960268 127% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0338461538462 0.0501214627716 68% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0307692307692 0.0437548338989 70% => OK
Prepositions: 0.169230769231 0.122226691241 138% => OK
Participles: 0.0430769230769 0.0403226058552 107% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.85875714858 2.80594681477 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0123076923077 0.0326793684256 38% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.126153846154 0.0861772015684 146% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0246153846154 0.021408717616 115% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00923076923077 0.011925033212 77% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1802.0 1933.35771543 93% => OK
No of words: 302.0 316.048096192 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.96688741722 6.12580529183 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20517956788 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.341059602649 0.374742101984 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.26821192053 0.28420135186 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.192052980132 0.203846283523 94% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.135761589404 0.137316102897 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85875714858 2.80594681477 102% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.037074148 92% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53642384106 0.56093040696 96% => OK
Word variations: 55.1620458466 60.7387585426 91% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0891783567 81% => OK
Sentence length: 23.2307692308 20.7743622355 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7998360302 49.517814964 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.615384615 127.492653851 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2307692308 20.7743622355 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.538461538462 0.814263465372 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 50.0519612837 49.1944974215 102% => OK
Elegance: 2.30303030303 1.69124875643 136% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.477355032605 0.332605444948 144% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.130859628027 0.102741220458 127% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0681779032645 0.0668466124924 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.635567947712 0.534860350844 119% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.13183732339 0.148594505496 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.240806025648 0.134430193775 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0888772144156 0.0742795772207 120% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.475159591717 0.324371583561 146% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0762424089707 0.0638462369009 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.369163300124 0.228012699653 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278562678211 0.058150111329 48% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 5.90881763527 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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