The scientist believes that computers will become more intelligent than human beings Some people find it is a positive while others think it is a negative development Discuss both points and give your own opinion

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The scientist believes that computers will become more intelligent than human beings, Some people find it is a positive while others think it is a negative development. Discuss both points and give your own opinion.

According to our computer scientist, in the future when computers are becoming more faster what they are now, more complex then they will be more intelligent than human brain. Some people take this development as blessings of technology or some people think as curse of technology. In the following paragraph, I shall discuss both views and according to that I will give my opinion.

On the positive side , compute or robots can do lots of jobs what human beings can do and thus save more labour force to workplace. They can do jobs fast and accurate than human beings hence , will save time and...

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