Education and Health are basic building blocks of person as well as country. Evidence shows that the progress and development of the country depends upon level of education and health of its citizen. The government should take primary responsibility of these two main sectors. Lets analyse this issue in detail.
First of all, Government public sector needs to take care of medical expenses because it is part of welfare of citizen as well as country. The public sector can introduce programs for the people with financial instability or too poor. For instance, In Tamil Nadu, Government bore responsibility of providing free medical care for the people who cannot afford to pay the money. In consequence, it is worth for the government to channel proportion of funding in health care. As a result, it can make progress in welfare of country citizens.
Not to mention, free education should be provided by state government for every human being present. It is convinced that people will have better future with knowledge can improve their skills and quality of life. In detail, Highly educated person can have more opportunities to get secured job thanks to college degree. Also, they can meet their basic necessities of life.Government must take initiatives and provide a path for the betterment of state or country.For instance, Many states are offering educational scholarships and financial aid with free of cost for the students. Consequently, people can contribute themselves back.
On the contrary, Funding free health care and education would be debatable issue for the government. Public sectors can offer educational loan and scholarships for whom school fees cannot be afforded easily. For medical care, Government can invest more in government healthcare sectors to afford more citizen expenses. A well educated city and health citizens represent welfare of country or a state.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, so, well, for instance, as a result, as well as, first of all, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1600.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31561461794 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86530549983 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538205980066 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.3362975337 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8888888889 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7222222222 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278648069294 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0989235152804 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106160165332 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186223691222 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634669808906 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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