Some claim that studying abroad has great benifits for a student's home country. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
There are plenty of advantages study in foreign country. Students gain their knowledge in particular field. In this fast moving world, learners meet the expert of particular field. However, student can not achieve advance knowledge in their home country because of lack avaibility of faculty. I strongly advocate the learning in foreign has good thought, and illustrate with two example of oxford university and times square news in New York.
To begin with, students go abroad for their
Further studies Although student explore wide technology knowledge with master educators. They meet other countries learners hence share something better for their better future. For example, oxford university state that the 70% of people migrate abroad to their doctorate or master study. Moreover, applicants chance to apply a job in international company like microsoft,amazon,google and so on. Applicants stay without the parents so they feel alone their family members hence they not feel better.
To other side, learning in home country is good thing but students do not adopt more knowledge compare to the outside country,consequently they are working with local company. To exemplify, times square news state that the many students stop their own growth because of their lack knowledge of particular field. However, technology has drastically increased in last two decades therefore, people buy new invension for great profit.
In final reckoning, studying abroad offers immense benifits of students. However, learning in home country provide a few benifits. I strongly advocate the former view, because of students associates with great knowledge for their future life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , amazon
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , consequently
...knowledge compare to the outside country,consequently they are working with local company. To...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, in particular, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59607843137 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88986349751 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576470588235 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.4736652207 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1875 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9375 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5625 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202402955572 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708714181971 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529404230178 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142104045782 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549635346868 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.9 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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