In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
In many countries, people are facing the problem of overweight and obesity, mainly because of unhygienic eating habits and lack of physical exercises. However, with an effort from the concerned citizens and from the government, the problems could be solved before it goes out of control.
The reason why the level of health and fitness is going down is primarily due to unhealthy diets. These days, many people live away from their families and are quite busy in job which means people hardly have time to prepare their own foods. This leads to a situation where many of us resort to fast foods such as burgers. These kinds of foods contain a lot of fat and calories. Moreover, in the crowded city life, only the few ones manage to escape from their busy schedule. The effect of which is many city dwellers stay months away from physical exercises, leading to exponential rise in their body mass.
However, it is possible to solve this problem by resorting to healthy eating habits and regular fitness trainings. First of all, we must understand that our dietary supplements play a vital role to keep ourselves healthy. Therefore, everyone must pay close attention to their food consumption. Secondly, it is important to draw a schedule and implement it sincerely. For example, in our schedule, we can clearly mention the time for outdoor activities such as running, or walking or playing some sorts of sports. These activities help us to build body stamina and endurance, and also keep a check in our body weight. Finally, an awareness program can be run by the government to make people aware about the potential health hazards of obesity.
In conclusion, unhealthy population which suffers from overweight and obesity is a by-product of our modern lifestyles. However, some efforts from all quarters should help to check this situation.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00974025974 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60407219989 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597402597403 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.4014717685 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.7647058824 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1176470588 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.82352941176 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155652412112 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0441607473549 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363724509927 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0852140596771 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378039769993 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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