In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels health and fitness is decreasing What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them

It is certain that, health related problem is increasing day by day in the world. In some nation's the average weight person is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are denied I will discuss about causes of problem and how to solve issue in forthcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, there are many causes of this problem. The first and foremost,nowadays,
most people are totally change their life style is the main reason they can prefer eating fast food which is easily available in market but it is tasty food and it is not hygienic food there are many diseases issue create such as blood pressure, heart beat are soon. Nextly, they avoid a home made food and most people is more seating at work in office. Furthermore, yougsters weight is increasing there is no excise in our body and can feel that unhealthy. For instance, a person is from used for vehicles and not used to own foot.

On the other side, there are ample ways to solve the problem every person should duty to avoid from restaurants food. And more time prefer eating to home made food. It's a hygienic food however, person is eating this food healthly life style in our country. Furthermore, the person is more and more excise joined in their life. After, eating a special diet such as meat, fish are adding on our diet. moreover,the government arrange health related awareness camp start in our cities because of, person is say and health more knowledge about them.
Before wrapping it up,itwould be noexaggeration to state that various factors led this ugly growth but it is a not hard but to crack however, the joint efforts of parents and school is mandatory to uproot get ride from society.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, for instance, such as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76949152542 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47215824343 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549152542373 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.3074712641 49.4020404114 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.230769231 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6923076923 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157067901897 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542706400528 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0771465864097 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0973905208326 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0966281620929 0.056905535591 170% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.78957915832 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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