In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are
decreasing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
In recent years, the health and fitness status have been declining significantly and people are becoming fatter compared to the past 20 years. I think this is mainly because of/due to their sedentary lifestyles and the popularity of fast food. There are a variety of possible solutions which should be implemented to deal with these causes.
There are many causes why people are becoming heavier and the standards of health and fitness are dropping these days. The main cause is that many citizens choose to drive their private cars or take public transport to work or school. By doing so, there has been a serious decline in most people’s levels of physical activity, resulting in them burning fewer calories and gain weight. Another reason for it is that people consume the large amount of processed foods such as hamburger, pizza and sandwich that contain large amounts of sugar, salt and artificial ingredients. This means that eating many convenience foods may have adverse effects on blood fat levels and increase one’s weight.
There are several solutions that we could take to solve the causes described above. A possible solution to improve our health and fitness is to increase their daily physical activities such as walking to work if they live close to their workplaces, joining the gym in the morning and so forth. In addition, what governments can do is to raise people’s awareness of obesity and several dangers of a poor diet. For instance, posters could be designed that illustrate how back pain is the result of obesity and mounting in public areas and vehicles.
In conclusion, the fall in health and fitness and increase in the weight of many people in various countries are a consequence of the lack of physical activity and the high consumption of convenience foods. However, these problems can be addressed if people increase their daily physical activity and are informed of the dangers of eating too much.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1637.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06811145511 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6251277692 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554179566563 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0091288712 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.928571429 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0714285714 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323245760897 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0968282171919 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447732345775 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179134722087 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362212384691 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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