In some countries governments pay the money for students’ university fees，while in other countries, students pay for themselves. Do advantages of governments paying for the students outweigh its disadvantages？
It is true that many local universities have free tuition for students, especially international students. While I accept that there are some drawbacks, I think that these are outweighed by the benefits of this trend.
On the one hand, there is certainly that tuition should be paid by learners themselves. Firstly, in terms of lazy people, they not only wouldn’t have the driving force to learn but also did not know how to manage their finances. Instead of expenditure on courses, some sorts of temptations as drugs could cost them a great deal, as they did not spend money on studying means too much money spend on else matters. Secondly, the government budget has been allocated for numerous areas like health care of transportations. So, if the substantial amount of education fees is placed on the Government, it would definitely lead the serious financial deficiency in other public services, thereby impair general quality of people’s lives.
On the other hand, I believe that there are great advantages can be gained. One reason is that overseas students who come from poor and developing countries could gain countless opportunities to broaden their horizons from advanced educational systems. Take Germany as an example, this country offers many free courses at some famous universities for both native and foreign students. Thus, this policy created many golden chances for talented students who were not financial enough to study a normal course. In addition, thanks to the transmission of knowledge from developed nations, young people could easily pursue higher education. Therefore, they would apply this sort of knowledge in earning money and have the higher standard of living.
In conclusion, the advantage students did not pay their fees at the university has more than compensated for the drawbacks.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, i think, in addition, in conclusion, sort of, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1544.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28767123288 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83460706011 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643835616438 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2591585783 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.285714286 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8571428571 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285142502557 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812681167107 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0783152002852 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179456588646 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0867509457213 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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