In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
In present time, world’s people are facing the ultimate fact that, our young generations are experiencing severe health related illness from the very beginning of their life and it is due to excess junk food consumption. To forbid the worrying condition, the state is approaching some essential steps and one of them is enhancement of taxes on convenience food. Thus, I partially agree with the given opinion. As in today’s world, it is one of the most sparkling heated debates. I believe that, our leaders should have an eye for finding out some other solutions, because only increasing the taxes on fast foods will not hamper the ratio of junk food intake.
First of all, as we know that, our teenagers are the prime customers for the convenience meals, where most of them are unaware of devastating health hazards of eating junk foods. At the same time we can ask, is it their fault? I don’t think so. They should made aware about the long term consequences of junk food consumption and it is plausible in several ways. For example, broadcasting health related adverts on children’s TV channels, introducing topics into their conventional education regarding dangerous health effects on fast food taking. In addition to, parents could play an important role to combat this worldwide problem by giving their children proper advice and guidelines of having balance diet.
Moreover, now-a-days people are leading a busy pace of life. Thus they are very often think for their regular diet, even some of them have no idea about what they are eating during lunch or is it a healthy diet? Therefore, people are depending on take-away meals for their daily livelihood. Government should impose rules on the working schedules, so that folks could enjoy their meals with adequate nutritious knowledge.
To conclude, in some of the global areas folks are becoming more habituated with convenience food despite realizing that they will suffer from heart diseases, obesity and dyslipidaemia in very near future, where only raising the food revenue will not slow down the tasty and unsafe junk food consumption.
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'if', 'moreover', 'regarding', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'even so', 'for example', 'in addition', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.2625 0.247107183377 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.15 0.155533422707 96% => OK
Adjectives: 0.095 0.0946595960268 100% => OK
Adverbs: 0.04 0.0501214627716 80% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0675 0.0437548338989 154% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.1325 0.122226691241 108% => OK
Participles: 0.06 0.0403226058552 149% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.72054046678 2.80594681477 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0125 0.0326793684256 38% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.005 0.00163938923432 305% => OK
Determiners: 0.07 0.0861772015684 81% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0225 0.021408717616 105% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0075 0.011925033212 63% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2129.0 1933.35771543 110% => OK
No of words: 347.0 316.048096192 110% => OK
Chars per words: 6.13544668588 6.12580529183 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20517956788 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.345821325648 0.374742101984 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.250720461095 0.28420135186 88% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.172910662824 0.203846283523 85% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.146974063401 0.137316102897 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72054046678 2.80594681477 97% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.037074148 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610951008646 0.56093040696 109% => OK
Word variations: 72.3228861691 60.7387585426 119% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0891783567 99% => OK
Sentence length: 21.6875 20.7743622355 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.1051255043 49.517814964 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.0625 127.492653851 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6875 20.7743622355 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6875 0.814263465372 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 3.99599198397 150% => OK
Readability: 46.7595461095 49.1944974215 95% => OK
Elegance: 1.76699029126 1.69124875643 104% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349896356752 0.332605444948 105% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0680486655669 0.102741220458 66% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0546422278361 0.0668466124924 82% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.476597676988 0.534860350844 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.19041571615 0.148594505496 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125745555225 0.134430193775 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657317050031 0.0742795772207 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.288039888038 0.324371583561 89% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.143848946182 0.0638462369009 225% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232694776746 0.228012699653 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055077479831 0.058150111329 95% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.68436873747 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.5751503006 233% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 10.4468937876 134% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.