Young people are frequently informed that there is no limit to what they can become if hard work is put into practice,a belief of certain cultures. The purpose of this essay is to state the merit such as boosting children self esteem and also having positive view about life,as well as the demerits which can leads to mental break down and feeling of social isolation among children.
On the one hand,one of the benefits of letting youngsters to think that they can become anything in life only if they are not relent on hard work is that ,it boost their self esteem. As children are often encouraged to put in much effort in whatever they do ,this allows them to believe in themselves. Also,make them trust their ability not to be lasy. Because,they will not be bothered about the negative side of what they are doing even though it going to be stressful for them. For instance,a student who is not real good in mathematics will keep the candle burning all night to ensure that he passes his examination by depriving himself of sleep at night. Thus,the determination he has made benefitted him at the long run.
On the. Other hand,the negative effect of letting children to think that they can become anything if they real put much effort is that it can leads to mental break down for them. As these children are still very young, stressing them mentally can expose and cause a lot of damages to them. Such as feeling of been a failure,if their target is not met. Moreso,they are prone to social isolation. Since most of their set have the same drive of becoming great in life. In a condition where they can not met up with their peer groups,they tend to stay alone, keep to themselves and refused to interact with members of the society.furthermore,they maybe led by peer influence to go into crime or even to the use of substance of abuse to maintain their status in the society. such is seen ,when a child tends to use cocaine or marijuana to remain active while studying. All these are the negative consequences of letting children to believe that there is no limit to their success.
In conclusion,as it have it's positive impact of telling children that they can become anything in life by some cultures,as it will increase their self image and their level of confidence,it also have negative effect because it predisposes them to psychological trauma and loneliness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, may, so, still, thus, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 24.0651302605 233% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 41.998997996 169% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1961.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 416.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71394230769 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68965249393 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521634615385 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 619.2 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.0220841432 49.4020404114 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.352941176 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4705882353 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23529411765 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272615290492 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0821374136329 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741340779964 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179972605669 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253655459172 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 9.78957915832 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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