Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.
Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?
Learning at-least one foreign language has become very important nowadays. This is because, common perception is, if we speak more foreign languages we will be considered as competent people. In this essay, I will discuss both the pros and cons of learning a foreign language and finally give my opinion.
To begin with, if a child starts to learn a strange language at his/her primary school, the child will easily catch up as he/she is very young. Because, the best time to study new things is the childhood. In addition, children will find it comfortable when they enter their secondary education if they learn during their early school days. For example, English is an international language and commonly used in most of the secondary education systems/universities. Therefore, if the student steps in to the university with a good English knowledge it will always be a competitive advantage.
In contrast, if we consider the negative side of introducing a foreign language in primary schools, it might be too early for a student as he/she will not be exposed an environment where he/she can apply the learning. Furthermore, this will put more pressure on young people as they are already burdened with a lot of technical subjects such as, mathematics, science chemistry and so on. On the other hand, this new learning will incur extra money by attending tuition classes.
In conclusion, I strongly believe it is advantageous to begin to learn a strange verbal communication mechanism at primary schools instead of waiting till the college education. This will increase the period of knowledge gaining and definitely enhances the competency of a child. Hence the advantages overtake the disadvantages.
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Discourse Markers used:
['finally', 'furthermore', 'hence', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'therefore', 'for example', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'in contrast', 'such as', 'to begin with', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.221498371336 0.247107183377 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.14332247557 0.155533422707 92% => OK
Adjectives: 0.120521172638 0.0946595960268 127% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0521172638436 0.0501214627716 104% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0488599348534 0.0437548338989 112% => OK
Prepositions: 0.123778501629 0.122226691241 101% => OK
Participles: 0.0325732899023 0.0403226058552 81% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.0251242824 2.80594681477 108% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0195439739414 0.0326793684256 60% => OK
Particles: 0.00325732899023 0.00163938923432 199% => OK
Determiners: 0.107491856678 0.0861772015684 125% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0358306188925 0.021408717616 167% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00651465798046 0.011925033212 55% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1713.0 1933.35771543 89% => OK
No of words: 277.0 316.048096192 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.18411552347 6.12580529183 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20517956788 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.397111913357 0.374742101984 106% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.335740072202 0.28420135186 118% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.234657039711 0.203846283523 115% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.140794223827 0.137316102897 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0251242824 2.80594681477 108% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.037074148 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595667870036 0.56093040696 106% => OK
Word variations: 63.8231773572 60.7387585426 105% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0891783567 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.7857142857 20.7743622355 95% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.672104705 49.517814964 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.357142857 127.492653851 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7857142857 20.7743622355 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.814263465372 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.99599198397 75% => OK
Readability: 53.3597215059 49.1944974215 108% => OK
Elegance: 1.54666666667 1.69124875643 91% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249824787691 0.332605444948 75% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0855448652262 0.102741220458 83% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0559114501566 0.0668466124924 84% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.522040757333 0.534860350844 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0874806803027 0.148594505496 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0977804711055 0.134430193775 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473092510369 0.0742795772207 64% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.236762182155 0.324371583561 73% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.037041184978 0.0638462369009 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165532447425 0.228012699653 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351845725487 0.058150111329 61% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.