Some people argue that it is more important to have an enjoyable job than to earn a lot of money. Others disagreed and think that a good salary leads to a better life.Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Essay topics:

Some people argue that it is more important to have an enjoyable job than to earn a lot of money. Others disagreed and think that a good salary leads to a better life.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

It is often debated that whether it is important to have an enjoyable job or a well-paid job for a better life. A discussion on both views is needed before giving my own opinion.

First, it is always necessary to work in an environment you find comfortable because it will motivate you, encouraging your endeavour, and keep you from getting burned out. However, you may face an issue of being constantly unable to make ends meet. A human-being, you have essential needs to satisfy as much as possible like food and water, etc. To do this, a big income is required.

On the other hand, a job with a good salary can enable you to support yourself and your family, for example, owning a car, a house, going on holiday abroad or affording a good education. It is much possible for you to make your dreams a reality. In return, you are required to work long hours, overtime sometimes or even at weekends. Still, you are to work under high pressure, in poor condition, etc.

In view of gains and losses, taking an interesting job or picking up a job that brings you a good income is just a matter of personal preference. Both of them are respectable. It is ideal for you to find a post in which you are given both the material and spiritual benefits. Unfortunately, this is not always possible! For my ultimate concern of a spiritual life, an amusing job is highly recommended, particularly a comfortable life at workplace.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: as
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...example, owning a car, a house, going on holiday abroad or affording a good educa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, so, still, well, for example, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1173.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61811023622 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79638715838 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586614173228 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1816707188 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.7857142857 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1428571429 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199053374198 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712596571106 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735539410579 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151515148866 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11036128566 0.056905535591 194% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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