Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them.
Decision-making plays a vital role in organizing the lives of human beings. It is often a debatable issue by some people that permitting toddlers to make decisions in their general daily activities turn them into self-centered individuals, whereas others support that it would have a positive impact on a child's future in several aspects. In my opinion, I firmly agree with the latter view and this essay will analyse both sides with proper conclusion.
To commence with, the kids who have the freedom of choosing whatever they want from their parents possibly lack the sense of responsibility as well as basic decorum in future. In other words, the liberty to select anything might drive a child to a stubborn and rebellious one, as childhood had a permanent effect on psychological and physical growth of any adolescent. To illustrate, in the recent study, nearly 60% of young children having right to judge in their preferences as their wish, were mostly tend to have unethical behavior towards society.
On the other hand, despite of the demerits for this freedom of choice, it is undoubtedly true that it can soar both confidence level and self-esteem among the adolescents. Having said that, it will aid a child to opt for better career options in the following years. Also, although too much freedom may have profound detrimental effects, it can increase the cognitive and logical thinking capabilities which are essential for making excellent judgement's. For instance, in most of the developed nations like the United States and Japan, kids at a very early age are encouraged to inculcate decision-making skills which helps them in making right choices in their lives.
To recapitulate, when it comes to the choice of selection by young children at early age, people always divide their opinion, some believe that having permission to choose anything with limited restrictions can drive them into selfish individual’s. However, others argue that it will enhance better qualities that will influence on the future of a child.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 166, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...responsibility as well as basic decorum in future. In other words, the liberty to select ...
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Line 2, column 504, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'tended'.
Suggestion: tended
... preferences as their wish, were mostly tend to have unethical behavior towards soci...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, may, so, well, whereas, for instance, as well as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1709.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16314199396 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8643064628 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616314199396 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.6791893917 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.416666667 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5833333333 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.41666666667 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181686418406 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574600257232 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539905389839 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110277887528 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322538745301 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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