Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters such as food clothes and entertainment is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes Other people believe that it is important

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Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

According to Section of society how claim that if children have their own life style and eat, watch, and wear which they like, it helps to generate a selfish community while other argue that it is totally children authority what they like to choose for their life. In the course of the essay, I will discuss both view points.

On the one hand, children starts to make their decision without any guidelines which creates a long term impact on society. If children eat to start fastfoods in their childhood which create impact on his fututre life, maybe they will deal some kind of disease. However, they are not contribute positively to society. Similarly, the habit of their entertainment and dresses will decide the direction of society. Due to their habits choose only for him self with consideration those who are waiting in line for these things produce selfishness.

On the other hand, children have independence to select their way of life because they will spend their with those habits which select in their childhood about eating, dressing, and how they entertain them self. If they chose their habits of these things it means the future life according to their way which they select in their childhood. However, if some one else impose their habits in the name guideways then his future along that individuals direction.

In my opinion, mothers and fathers continue give instruction to their child on that stage, when he will not differentiate between positives and drawbacks of these things. While, after that child have full freedom make a choice of their life style.

In conclusion, children who have independence in early stage, they will become only thought about them him self in future while other argue for their freedom.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: contributed
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...sing, and how they entertain them self. If they chose their habits of these things...
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Message: Did you mean 'someone'?
Suggestion: someone
... select in their childhood. However, if some one else impose their habits in the name gu...
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Line 5, column 437, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...me guideways then his future along that individuals direction. In my opinion, mothers an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, similarly, so, then, while, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1460.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43766343862 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520547945205 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.7716280503 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.307692308 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23076923077 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227364600634 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.089206953176 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508051399213 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13943717644 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0268192323571 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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