Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters ( such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is imporant for children to make decisions about matters that affect them.
Discuss both views and give your opinion
A society must have responsible individuals who takes care of the wholesome growth and development. In some situations, people believe allowing children to make decisions on everyday chores may not provide responsible individuals, whereas, it may make them a selfish individual. While other group of people claim children should be given opportunity to decide on the important situations that involve their welfare. This essay intends to discuss and provide examples favoring both perspectives.
On the one hand, Children are grown in an environment where parents decide on their child’s behalf. If young individuals were given chance to decide on their daily activites such as the food,clothes and the contents of their entertainment, it might have some negative impacts on them. For instance, children may want things that may not be good for their mental and physical health. However, if they were given the autonomy to choose from early age, they might throw tantrums unnecessarily. While most people believe, if this was practiced by their parents continuously and it might potentially develop them into selfish individuals.
Conversely, other set of individuals firmly believe, it is crucial to give opportunity and let those children to decide on matters that might have an impact on them. In addition, people argue children have the right to decide on such matters. The reason put forth by them directly contradicts with the ideology of the first mentioned group. They firmly believe giving autonomy at young age can benefit the brains development and aid them to tackle any difficult situations in future. In addition, it might teach confidence, self respect, and self-care.
I am convinced that, parents should have control over the certain situations, that may have a bad influcence on their children day to day life. However, they also need to provide support and allow enough autonomy in situations where their voice mean the most.
To summarise, although most parents want their children to be compassionate individual who cares and respect others, they still have to be little lenient on hearing their opinion on choices that might have impact on their lifes. Hence, they can grow both as a responsible citizen of the society with self confidence.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... it may make them a selfish individual. While other group of people claim children sh...
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Suggestion: , clothes
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'brains'' or 'brain's'?
Suggestion: brains'; brain's
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...them to tackle any difficult situations in future. In addition, it might teach confidence...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, first, hence, however, if, may, so, still, whereas, while, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1918.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31301939058 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80087046224 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529085872576 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 588.6 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2073438698 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.555555556 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0555555556 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252943647922 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767947406978 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617528262572 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147189217737 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055805961006 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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