Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Making children to take decisions by their owns is always been in controversy. However, major chunk of people believe that children should set free to make their own choices on everyday things such as food, clothes and many other things while other thinks that children should mere on that things that affects them. I partially agree with the notion and further give relevant explanation for the same.
On one hand, it is important for parents to allow their children in choosing things like food and clothes. This will enhance their decision making power and by this children can learn from their mistakes which are of very less importance. Moreover, parents can guide their children if they are making some wrong decision and can bring them in right path. However, some people deem that these would cause children to think only about themselves which I believe is not true. To exemplify, if a child allowed to choose his clothes without any pressure than his parents could see how is the imagination and decision making power and parents can also change the mindset of child if they are directed in wrong path. Henceforth, it is crucial part of a child's life to make small decisions.
On the other hand, a section of society believe that children should only allow to make those decisions which affects them. Some psychologists admire that, children if set free to take their on decisions whether it is small or big would have great influence on their life. To illustrate this, a boy who is about 9 years old and who is allowed to take decisions in such a way that it should not affect him as well as is surroundings, will have great pressure on him and also it is likely that he would commit some mistakes. Therefore, if children are allowed to take big decision at a very small age than they should not be pressurised by the society.
In conclusion, I believe that children even they are not mature should allow to take risk of taking decision on small things clothes, entertainment and food whereas if they had to take big decision than society should not force them to take that decision which have good impact on them as well as on others.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 161, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ance their decision making power and by this children can learn from their mistakes ...
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Line 3, column 507, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'choosing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: choosing
... true. To exemplify, if a child allowed to choose his clothes without any pressure than h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 48.0 24.0651302605 199% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1778.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 378.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7037037037 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39450580962 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.449735449735 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.9847641025 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.0 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331606360048 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127936148294 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0886382064595 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212513297276 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0917240104744 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.98 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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