Some people believe that allowing multinational companies to open offices and factories in developing countries is good for their economic growth of those countries. Others, however, believe that governments should ask foreign companies to shut shop and help local companies to grow. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is a popular opinion that the economy of the nations that are developing can be improved by permitting international companies to function their offices. On the other hand, others have a contrasting opinion, requesting the government to close these offices and aid their regional companies to develop. This essay would discuss few points which agree and few points which disagree to this statement.
To begin with, multinational companies play a key role in the survival of the developing country’s economy. For example, according to research, the shampoo company l’oreal, has increased India’s economy by 30% in the recent years. Along with that, it has also increased the employment capacity of many Indians. This is a huge benefit for a developing country like India.
On the flip side, there are few people who believe that the introduction of these companies would take over their small companies, resulting in people losing their jobs. For example, India is known for their authentic kolapuri slippers which are made by rural people. This crowd does not have any knowledge about other professions. The introduction of foreign company slippers will destroy the sale of these regional slippers. Hence, these local people will end up being unemployed and the footwear which represents the Indian culture, will be forgotten. This can be rectified by asking the government to promote the regional products rather than closing the foreign offices.
Having analysed the above statements, it is sufficed to say that both these companies can survive alongside each other if the government takes the proper initiatives to promote the local companies instead of shutting the international offices.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... shutting the international offices.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, then, for example, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41417910448 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78327946416 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570895522388 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4382956849 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.642857143 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1428571429 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274542062747 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0918327266405 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063718295231 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157743370926 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0188822201884 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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