Some people believe that children should go to extra classes after school. Others, however, think that children should spend that time playing instead. Discuses both views and give your own opinion.
These days parents are becoming more concerned with their children and especially how their free time is occupied. Although many people opine children’s leisure hours should be fully occupied by after-school activities, I strongly believe that, in spite of its merits, children need to be free to do whatever they want.
Adults always complain of being suffered by lack of enough time to accomplish their goals, whereas children are blessed with sufficient leisure time, often wasted easily and worthlessly. Children’s spare time should be harnessed in a constructive and practical way; as a result, it paves the way for being succeed in following stages of their life, in addition to avoid boring them. Accordingly, they can acquire different skills such as foreign languages, sports and music accrued by utilizing childhood after-school free time and they therefore can enjoy their skillfulness and abilities during their adulthood when it would be not easily possible to gain these skills due to hectic life.
On the other hand, ironically, much exposure to organized learning plans, rather than doing entertaining activities, adversely affects a child’s mind and it is likely to cause anxiety and some emotional illness like trauma in the future. Contrarily, parents, correlating with psychology, are requested to leave their sons and daughters free to play how much they want within their free hours and they are recommended not being too much obsessed about their time wasted because this is exactly what children require to be raised healthily. Children’s mind are developed sustainability through enjoyable activities and also their potentialities are not actualized but via playing game. Hence parents are intellectual, to whom psychologists-recommended methods of child rearing are given a marked preference rather than their wishes, often stemmed from their inferiority complex and lack of confidence, to put their children under intense pressure to succeed simplistically.
To recapitulate, the training classes, planned to occupy pupils’ leisure hours, seem worthwhile; nonetheless, entertainment should be taken precedence and children have not to be constrained to participate in such extra classes.
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Discourse Markers used:
['accordingly', 'also', 'but', 'hence', 'if', 'nonetheless', 'so', 'therefore', 'whereas', 'while', 'as for', 'in addition', 'such as', 'as a result', 'in spite of', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.22641509434 0.247107183377 92% => OK
Verbs: 0.199460916442 0.155533422707 128% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0970350404313 0.0946595960268 103% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0727762803235 0.0501214627716 145% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0646900269542 0.0437548338989 148% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0943396226415 0.122226691241 77% => OK
Participles: 0.0727762803235 0.0403226058552 180% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 3.15554235629 2.80594681477 112% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0485175202156 0.0326793684256 148% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0323450134771 0.0861772015684 38% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0161725067385 0.021408717616 76% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0161725067385 0.011925033212 136% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2233.0 1933.35771543 115% => OK
No of words: 336.0 316.048096192 106% => OK
Chars per words: 6.64583333333 6.12580529183 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20517956788 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.422619047619 0.374742101984 113% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.33630952381 0.28420135186 118% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.244047619048 0.203846283523 120% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.175595238095 0.137316102897 128% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15554235629 2.80594681477 112% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.037074148 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.56093040696 111% => OK
Word variations: 74.8677473966 60.7387585426 123% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0891783567 62% => OK
Sentence length: 33.6 20.7743622355 162% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.2669568365 49.517814964 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 223.3 127.492653851 175% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.6 20.7743622355 162% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.6 0.814263465372 196% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 67.230952381 49.1944974215 137% => OK
Elegance: 1.168 1.69124875643 69% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222300912221 0.332605444948 67% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.107514868964 0.102741220458 105% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0198579044938 0.0668466124924 30% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.637679971161 0.534860350844 119% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.15478690844 0.148594505496 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106080082545 0.134430193775 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054080889788 0.0742795772207 73% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.321002814794 0.324371583561 99% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0549436596233 0.0638462369009 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165247174761 0.228012699653 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458375416114 0.058150111329 79% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41683366733 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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