Today some people argue that computers have became a mass hindrance than a support in today's world.In opposite view,others believe that computer is a compulsory equipment which people can not avoid it in their day to day works. in my point of view, even though computer has become a most useful tool, there should be some limitations to work on it.
To begin with,there are several ways of interfering of computers to the human beings as a hindrance. Firstly, nowadays most of the developed countries suffer from unemployment issues. The reason of aforesaid issue is over usage of computers which lead to reduce employment opportunities. Secondly, computers tend to blunt creativity and human skills. As a example , creative artist take one day to draw a beautiful picture and computer also can draft that kind of art within few minutes by using some applications. As a result, demand for that kind of great profession can be decreased. In addition, computers never value human feelings and it may cause to lots of human issues on various social aspects. Moreover, today most of the children who have addicted with computers, involve in various unethical behaviors like hacking others details and information as well as in cyber crimes.
On the other hand, there are numerous ways of using computers as indispensable tool which useful for lots of human activities. Firstly, it has became most useful educational tool which provides educational opportunities, and knowledge sharing. Similarly, today computer have higher demand in marketing fields to make presentations, advertisements etc. Not only for marketing sector but also to the manufacturing and engineering sector computer has became essential tool. Most importantly, in parallel to the technology development ,most of the innovations are doing best on Computer technology.
In conclusion, by contrasting both views, that computer as a hindrance for today's world and computers as a indispensable tool, there are lots of pros and cons for both views. In my opinion, I firmly believe that computer is a essential tool for human activities, but there should be some limitations as well as securities for using computers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, similarly, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1837.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27873563218 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0231494096 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534482758621 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7178693468 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.058823529 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4705882353 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4117647059 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266372613893 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856587289537 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606434134017 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184210731474 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564277149498 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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