Some people believe that extreme sports should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
While excessive numbers of people are showing interest in different kinds of sports, some people raised question on the legality of extreme sports such as sky jump, skate board, snow board, drifting and many more owing to different reasons. I believe that these sports should be continued as lots of people like such games.
Increasing fatalities in sports promoted the people to think that games adventures in nature should be banned as it cost the life of people. It is generally seen that players start to play such games out of joy and later on make the profession for earning without knowing the repercussion of following these games. For example, Louse Hamilton, a car race driver opted the sports initially just because of thrill in speeding the car but he was seriously injured many times and had to leave the game. Furthermore, almost no international guidelines exists for adventures games and people rarely know the safety rule which should be exercised while practicing or playing such sports. As a result, most of the governments hesitate to take care of these sports enthusiastic.
Despite the risks involved in such games, people prefer to let these games be played and they have valid arguments to support. Firstly, People enjoy playing these games and so the millions of viewers across the countries. For instance, vast numbers of people go to Europe in winter for games, especially for snowboarding and different international competitions are organized and viewed by large number of people. Secondly, extreme games hardly required any stadium or special facilities to build. These games are purely nature centric and do not add burden on govt. to spend the money. Finally, these games are cash rich and people earn the life time money in one go and also there are less player to participate so people believe that chances of winning the games are high.
To conclude, Adventures games are risky and people suffer injuries invariably. However, if these games are played with safety then these games should be allowed to continue. Government may also help to formulate the guidelines.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, thus, while, for example, for instance, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1765.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08645533141 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57636242899 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57060518732 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.2145240764 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.823529412 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4117647059 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.11764705882 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174646795134 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627639732998 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571501822984 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124184762079 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468811486987 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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