Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Nowadays, there is a widespread belief that sharing information among the people who work in the domain of the business, academic and science is essential. Since the idea of distributing wide range of information is likely assist them to prevent some issues, which in turn, may contribute individuals' standard of living. However, it needs to take into account, not all information ought to be shared because it is highly likely that it may implicate some downsides that will lead to some unavoidable problems.
There are multifarious reasons, why individuals prefer particular information ought to be opened to the public, First and foremost, by sharing out some important information to people working in the field of business, they will be able to tackle problems such as, price and quality. For instance, they are able to improve and create wide range of commodities by using various techniques, which in turn help them to reduce their expanses on these products. Therefore, people will be able to purchase not only quality goods but also for reasonable price.
Likewise, it is worth to mention, sharing information might have great impact on improving the lives of people providing that solely right kind of information is used. People who suffered from serious diseases might be a good example to support my idea. By distributing this information to a vast amount of sources, will be beneficial, as by preventing these diseases by virtue of a large public, they will be able to stop wide spreading these diseases into other countries. However, it does not mean that all information should be given to public freely.
It is worth to take into consideration that vast amount of information ought to be restricted from spreading. This information is extremely essential and valuable to be shared because the improper use of these dates will cause inevitable issues around the world. It can be exemplified by following situation. Some countries manufacture terrific weapons which are able to destroy regions easily, but they will never give their techniques to other countries, particularly Islamic countries, since this may lead to beginning of the war. As a result, inappropriate use of techniques and information might be the root cause of embarking on unpreventable disaster.
By way of a conclusion, sharing variety of information like doubled-edged sword because there are not only involve benefits that may have enhance lives of people but also have a huge negative influence on society as a whole
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 139, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'enhanced'.
Suggestion: enhanced
...not only involve benefits that may have enhance lives of people but also have a huge ne...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, likewise, may, so, therefore, for instance, kind of, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 41.998997996 157% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2104.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 406.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18226600985 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92739352448 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 677.7 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.5080025281 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.5 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.375 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296100527091 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103689178786 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509970519078 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171648248155 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468552914382 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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