Some people believe that modern designs for schools and offices with more open spaces are necessary. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such spaces? Give your opinion.
Modernity has brought gigantic changes in the infrastructural development of offices and premises. Presently, the trend of having adequate space while designing the school buildings and offices is gaining prevalence. Some people assert that open space is required for additional purposes. Here, i would like to account for merits and demerits of this happening with my perception.
There are manifold benefits of this trend. First and foremost, open spaces keep buildings fully ventilated and prevent rooms from suffocation. For instance, air passes through the rooms easily if a healthy space is kept inside the offices or rooms. Hence, it is essential to maintain space while making buildings. Space preserved in the rooms can be utilised to place other stuff such as chairs, printer and tables if official formalities rise in future. On the contrary, it has thorny side too.
Numerous drawbacks can be put down behind this happening. Initially, it is really difficult to do sanitation everyday if the room size is bigger than normal. Surplus amount of money has to be invested if space is extended inside the rooms. To demonstrate, management has to invest extra money on materials such as floor tiles, paints, decorative material and so on. People who sit in the rooms cannot listen the voice properly if rooms are oversized.
From my notion, both sides have their own significance. Undeniably, keeping extra space has some disadvantages. However, multifarious benefits such as proper ventilation, decoration, and commodities arrangements could be availed under the presence of extra availability of space. Thus, official authorities must have open space in order to prevent themselves from inconvenience.
To recapitulate, architectural skills enhance the elegance of modern premises. It is essential to maintain proper space in the buildings to find out the best comforts and arrangements.
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Essay evaluation report
flaws:
Don't need both:
'On the contrary, it has thorny side too.'
and 'Numerous drawbacks can be put down behind this happening. '
One is enough.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 21 15
No. of Words: 295 350
No. of Characters: 1558 1500
No. of Different Words: 183 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.144 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.281 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.869 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 118 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 88 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 71 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 44 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.048 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.835 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.571 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.284 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.497 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.036 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 296, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...required for additional purposes. Here, i would like to account for merits and de...
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Line 3, column 130, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... fully ventilated and prevent rooms from suffocation. For instance, air passes th...
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Line 3, column 446, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...and tables if official formalities rise in future. On the contrary, it has thorny side to...
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Line 5, column 110, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...it is really difficult to do sanitation everyday if the room size is bigger than normal....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, really, so, thus, while, as to, for instance, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1615.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47457627119 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00595215334 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616949152542 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.4480459144 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.9047619048 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0476190476 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61904761905 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278022881569 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753189421131 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669959507425 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151797673972 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0866208698958 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.85 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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