Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree?
Freedom of choice is an important aspect of humanity, it sets us apart from animals. There is a widely held perception among some that, in this age, humans are faced with excessive choices. I believe that people are now confronted with more as they lead their daily lives.
To begin, in the past, there was an inmate selection of gender; humans were either males or females. Now, it is no longer a decision made exclusively by genetics, people now have the privilege of deciding what sex they want to belong to. For example, some ladies in the UK, as reported by the Punch newspaper, decided to aquire masculine features such as penis and testicles. They did this in a bid to identify with the male sex. Also, some individuals prefer to refer to themselves as either gay or lesbian, these are novel words employed to describe new gender choices.
Another aspect of human culture where a variety of choices are being made nowadays is marriage. Decades ago, it was unheard of that a man marries another man. Freedom of choice has also evolved to this part of life. Several examples abound; there are wedding ceremonies being held between men, even cases of matrimony between humans and objects such as pillows. These are scenarios there were perceived as absurd some years ago, however, due to civilization, we now have the ability to choose what or who to marry.
In conclusion, choices are now available in things that were hitherto thought to be congenitally or socially predetermined, like sex and marriage partners. Certainly, the range of choices now at our disposal has become expansive.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, apart from, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1338.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91911764706 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57784302353 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2741642944 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1333333333 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161609427667 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470944318857 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404958975949 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0895261362494 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266447083219 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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