Some people believe that studying at University or college is the best route to a successfuk career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both view.
People have differing view with regard to answer the question how to get successful career. Both ways studying at University or college and achieving a job immediately after school can drive people to gain a fruitful career if they work hard.
On one hand, there are several reasons that learning at college is the best way to get higher career. Firstly, Universities allow students to broaden their knowledge throughout courses in University. For example, for computer science students can learn theory and also practical of computer in order to understand deeply about their field. An other reason is that nowadays companies usually pay a high salary for those who got a higher degree than people do not have. As a result, studying at college can help student to accelerate a good career in the short time.
On the other hand, some people debate that they can get a good job easily after highschool without speding time to study in universities. it is obvious that, there are numerous jobs which do not require students’ knowledge such as a waiter or waitress, assisstant of chef, seller in stores just to name a few. These jobs only require a basic hands on experience of students and healthy body. Additional, working right after school helps people to less reply on their family’s finance as they can earn money immediately. In short, getting a job after highschool is really useful for those who do not want to study academic.
In conclusion, while entrancing University is a great way to get better career, I would argue that reaching a job after school can lead people to have good career also.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, really, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in short, such as, as a result, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1344.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90510948905 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65661344016 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594890510949 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.5776982993 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 103.384615385 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6153846154 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323655838955 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117713113092 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0898500774523 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222555011435 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0681218472831 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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