Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion
There have been multiple controversies about whether continue higher education after graduating or not. While some people argue that seeking jobs straight after schooling is a better option, I personally advocate pursuing further study for the following reasons.
On the one hand, start work straight after school has a vast amount of positive effect on young people. By getting a job sooner than others, which means that facing a significant amount of dilemma, they can be mature efficiently. In this way, young people can acquire new knowledge and gain real-life experience, which helps them learn and grow as a person. Besides, people who tend to work instead of getting a higher education may have good opportunities in the future. For instance, when people keep working for a long time, they can learn practical skills, thereby doing the job efficiently, getting promotions and succeeding in their career.
However, I would argue that continue studying is a better decision in many aspects. People who have an academic qualification can open the door to better employment prospects. There are progressively more applicants for one position in a company, which means that degree is an essential option to decrease a significant number of applications. Moreover, it is the fact that most jobs require specific knowledge and skills. For example, when people decide to be a doctor or lawyer in the future, as a result, they need to undergo years of training and gain qualifications.
In conclusion, although there are arguments both for beginning work straight after school and further study, it seems to me that continue higher education is a better choice for students to be successful in their career.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, may, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22101449275 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83546150476 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.384769539078 520% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9307092156 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.846153846 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196105869395 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696471334564 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622541966523 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134358659096 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463662226254 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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