Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children).
Schools are an important part of our life as they play a crucial role in developing our personalities and preparing us for us practical life. It is often argued that it should be made mandatory by schools to require its students to participate in some kind of community service. This essay agree with this point of view. First it will discuss how volunteering in different charitable programs can help student acquire good personalities traits and improve our mental health and then it will talk about how such an experience is beneficial for volunteers themselves in the long-term.
To begin with, indulging in community services can bring great social consequences. In fact, various research studies has shown that helping others and bringing positive changes in the society has phenomenal effects on our mental being. For example if student of a certain school volunteer each Saturday to distribute free food to the destitute and homeless people, then not only they will learn empathy and compassion for others, but it will also give them a sense of satisfaction being a contributing member of the society. Consequently, this will raise their self-esteem and give them reason to become please with their lives.
Moreover, involving in community service also help us to strengthen our profiles. Looking at the world nowadays which has become too competitive we have to stand out from other in order to secure any position we seek. Weather it is a college admission or a job application, having experience of community service besides academic or work experience enhances our chances of securing the opportunities offered. For instance, universities give great emphasis on extra-curricular actives along with students’ past educational performance in making admission decision and it is even common observation that many school give preference to student with good history of participation in community service over those who demonstrate good grades with little or none of such experience.
To summarize, it should be made requirement by schools to make its students participate in community services as this will not only make them adopt good personality characteristics and help them view their life in good way, but will also allow them to make great achievements in their future.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, if, look, moreover, so, then, for example, for instance, in fact, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1943.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32328767123 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03008744293 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580821917808 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 612.9 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.1682409359 49.4020404114 193% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.461538462 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0769230769 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92307692308 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165891956542 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586820010716 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464704690171 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103304209764 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0232464706513 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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