Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children).
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people assert that unpaid service for community should be a mandatory part of high school programs. From my point of view, this statement has more advantages than disadvantages.
Firstly, the existence of this program affect young people from a psychological aspect. For instance, working for a charity aids to uncover their capabilities to help other people. Meanwhile, their attitude and especially respect to other people changes, which influences them only in a positive way. Improving the neighborhood area needs not only physical strength but also endurance in case of lifting and moving out the objects to different places. This work is essential for male persons, who may be working in the building infrastructure. For female persons it might be advantageous if they want to cognize how properly look for a garden. Some may find inspiration during this work and somehow determine their goal, instead of studying something that they either hesitated or did not want to. As regards, teaching sports to young children is necessary when high school students do not have patience or perseverance in reaching their purposes. Young people occasionally supposed to have fun and at that moment, their teachers have to show persistence and if needs force them to learn. In addition, it helps to develop imagination, because students have to think up uncommon tricks to convince children.
Some people think that unpaid employment for high school students is required. I believe that the existence of this work experience may bring more benefits than its lack.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'so', 'while', 'as regards', 'for instance', 'in addition']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.258181818182 0.247107183377 104% => OK
Verbs: 0.16 0.155533422707 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0909090909091 0.0946595960268 96% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0436363636364 0.0501214627716 87% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0509090909091 0.0437548338989 116% => OK
Prepositions: 0.116363636364 0.122226691241 95% => OK
Participles: 0.0327272727273 0.0403226058552 81% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.8242634438 2.80594681477 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0472727272727 0.0326793684256 145% => OK
Particles: 0.00727272727273 0.00163938923432 444% => OK
Determiners: 0.0727272727273 0.0861772015684 84% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0181818181818 0.021408717616 85% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0145454545455 0.011925033212 122% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1581.0 1933.35771543 82% => OK
No of words: 250.0 316.048096192 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.324 6.12580529183 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20517956788 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.4 0.374742101984 107% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.32 0.28420135186 113% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.236 0.203846283523 116% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.144 0.137316102897 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8242634438 2.80594681477 101% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.037074148 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628 0.56093040696 112% => OK
Word variations: 68.2556293876 60.7387585426 112% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0891783567 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.8571428571 20.7743622355 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.1334877824 49.517814964 53% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.928571429 127.492653851 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8571428571 20.7743622355 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.857142857143 0.814263465372 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38877755511 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 3.99599198397 75% => OK
Readability: 49.8571428571 49.1944974215 101% => OK
Elegance: 1.6 1.69124875643 95% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.416060052866 0.332605444948 125% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.116398473634 0.102741220458 113% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0522355092275 0.0668466124924 78% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.458760611552 0.534860350844 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.125363539227 0.148594505496 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149197612831 0.134430193775 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0981647638903 0.0742795772207 132% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.155041751765 0.324371583561 48% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0320834906296 0.0638462369009 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.276681619475 0.228012699653 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474095695942 0.058150111329 82% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.68436873747 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 5.90881763527 169% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.5751503006 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 10.4468937876 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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More content wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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