Some people get into debt by buying things they don’t need and can’t afford. What are reasons for these behaviors? What action can be taken to prevent people from having this problem?
It is universal among humans to have the desire to possess expensive items. Some people who do not have any restraint when it comes to shopping often face serious economic / financial consequences. Such behaviour can be due to advertising propaganda and it can be prevented by proper counselling.
With the advancement in mass media technology, information about many products continues to reach the customers. After repeatedly watching a particular advertisement, people tend to purchase them even if they cannot afford them or do not have any immediate requirement. This became more rampant with the advent of online platforms for shopping, where many things can be bought even from the home. False pride is another factor that drives the compulsive urge to buy.
Those who compare their possessions with those of their wealthy neighbour tend to make unnecessary purchases. On the other hand self contained individuals utilizes their money judicuiously. As utilizing money for such activities can have devastating results on the entire family, effective measures are to be taken to prevent it. One such thing is having a reasonable budget plan. The source of income and expenditure should be caluculated on a timely basis. Expensive things should only be bought with the savings.
Without such a plan, the management of money can be difficult. Sometimes excessive spending can be due to psychological abnormality and requires counselling from the experts. The root cause of such behaviour can be identified and cured with proper treatment.
To conclude, the easy accessibility to various products coupled with greed can lead to thoughtless spending. This behaviour can be kept in check through proper financial planning.
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Your article is very good,…
Your article is very good, highlighting the current situation in society. Everyone should have a right direction in spending is essential. fnf I totally agree with your point
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1548.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33793103448 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95596972141 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627586206897 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.2409987036 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.4 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.25 7.06120827912 18% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288400591508 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790340476835 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055713679345 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140524879789 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038554677308 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.1 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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