Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sport facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some people think that the best opportunity to improve public health is by increasing the number of sport facilities. However, some think that this would have influence on public health and that other measurements are required.
On the one hand, this improvement leads to the decrease of the government’s money and certain consequences that can negatively affect the country. Firstly, building sport facilities does not guarantee that all people will go there. This opportunity is related to their financial capability, and the cost will reflect on their budget; thus, people will think about it carefully. In addition, it should be mentioned that these facilities cover a big place; otherwise, factories, schools, or kindergartens can be built, which would have more importance for the common people. The factory is one of the main sources, which can provide the country with paraphernalia, resources, or other needs.
On the other hand, these sport facilities are necessary because a healthy community implies that the well-being of people can positively affect the country. Healthy people can work more than unhealthy people, which eventually has more advantages than disadvantages. Additionally, the manufacture of materials, the development of agriculture, and the progress of the country in different aspects may improve due to the existence of sport facilities, because they can aid to sustain the healthy conditions of people. In addition, improving public health is one of the key factors that may lead to the emergence of promoting companies, which can impact the common people to sustain healthy life style.
The issue of increasing sport facilities has both advantages and disadvantages related to public health. I would not recommend building these sport facilities because of the disadvantages.
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Suggestion:
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'thus', 'well', 'in addition', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.250793650794 0.247107183377 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.139682539683 0.155533422707 90% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0825396825397 0.0946595960268 87% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0380952380952 0.0501214627716 76% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0190476190476 0.0437548338989 44% => OK
Prepositions: 0.111111111111 0.122226691241 91% => OK
Participles: 0.0349206349206 0.0403226058552 87% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.02180936153 2.80594681477 108% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0253968253968 0.0326793684256 78% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.11746031746 0.0861772015684 136% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0507936507937 0.021408717616 237% => Try to use less modal verbs (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.0190476190476 0.011925033212 160% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1822.0 1933.35771543 94% => OK
No of words: 279.0 316.048096192 88% => OK
Chars per words: 6.53046594982 6.12580529183 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20517956788 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.41935483871 0.374742101984 112% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.329749103943 0.28420135186 116% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.232974910394 0.203846283523 114% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.197132616487 0.137316102897 144% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02180936153 2.80594681477 108% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.037074148 80% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505376344086 0.56093040696 90% => OK
Word variations: 49.2275513365 60.7387585426 81% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0891783567 81% => OK
Sentence length: 21.4615384615 20.7743622355 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8719596964 49.517814964 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.153846154 127.492653851 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4615384615 20.7743622355 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.769230769231 0.814263465372 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 54.4364488558 49.1944974215 111% => OK
Elegance: 2.01612903226 1.69124875643 119% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.489025756573 0.332605444948 147% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.158336634294 0.102741220458 154% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0996707492504 0.0668466124924 149% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.620446337072 0.534860350844 116% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.204875917994 0.148594505496 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.233528531068 0.134430193775 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134366696282 0.0742795772207 181% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.352476491846 0.324371583561 109% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0205825958223 0.0638462369009 32% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.364886518869 0.228012699653 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.150246444082 0.058150111329 258% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.68436873747 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.90881763527 118% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.5751503006 155% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 10.4468937876 124% => OK
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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