Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.
Nowadays, people’s lifestyle becomes worse and they get illness frequently. Some people think that develop many sports facilities could keep the public healthy. Others argue that there are other measures that are more important. In these essay, I would describe both of these views.
To begin with, there is a reason why expanding the number of sports facilities would make citizen’s health better. People need to be encouraged to do physical activities, to make them body become strong and prevent various diseases. Government or companies could build a stadium, but it would need a large area. Despite that, they could construct gym which is very popular in recent years and sounds modern. People could go to the gym after they finish their work. However, the cost of using this facility is expensive such as for paying the trainer. Also, not everyone understands about how to use this facility, especially elders and children.
On the other hand, besides build sports facilities, the government better increase the number of parks or green open spaces, because they are suitable for everybody and accessible as easy as pie. Also, by providing some sports facilities in the parks, people could enjoy and exercise together with their family and friends. Nevertheless, these are not enough as the measures on people’s health. The medical check-up is required for prevention. As we know, it could take people an arm and a leg, so the administration could make the check-up event free. Such as, before children, sign up to the primary school, the government could give free kids’ dental control for poor society.
All in all, I completely agree that raising the expansion of green open spaces would improve the people’s health because of the clean air that they produce for us to breathe. Also, the medical check-up is necessary for avoiding of the disorder.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, nevertheless, so, as for, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1585.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17973856209 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6733723998 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604575163399 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.7541437334 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.4210526316 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1052631579 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26315789474 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19702613094 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592702688045 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543391776192 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122383567904 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311954378541 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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