The development of a nation and health of its denizens is positively correlated hence, healthcare has become one of the primary areas of government's focus. The view suggesting that increasing number of sports facilities to improve public health is the best way to achieve this target is partially correct and we definitely need some other measures also to get a long-lasting impact.
Sports surely help humans to lead an active lifestyle which is a vital factor for higher longevity. They also rejuvenate people and give them an opportunity to meet other people which could have a positive impact on their overall health but the mere presence of high number of sports facilities does not ensure improvement in health. For instance, the natives of a city have ample sports facilities but if they do not get enough time to actually avail them then sports facilities are of no use.
There are different factors which act as a precursor for healthy lives of human beings and measures should be taken to improve these factors as well. Organizations should work towards maintaining work life balance of an employee like limited number of hours in office, higher incentives and facilities which can act as stress buster for its employees. All these will lead to a satisfactory life and thus will improve their health. Government should provide better hospitals in the country as it will help in timely and efficient recuperation of the individuals.
Hence, it can be concluded that increased number of facilities definitely play a role in health improvement but there are several other factors as well. For the overall health improvement it is necessary to focus on all the measures rather than just one.
Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'hence', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'thus', 'well', 'for instance']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.262626262626 0.247107183377 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.151515151515 0.155533422707 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.104377104377 0.0946595960268 110% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0572390572391 0.0501214627716 114% => OK
Pronouns: 0.040404040404 0.0437548338989 92% => OK
Prepositions: 0.117845117845 0.122226691241 96% => OK
Participles: 0.020202020202 0.0403226058552 50% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.75279875963 2.80594681477 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.030303030303 0.0326793684256 93% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0875420875421 0.0861772015684 102% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.030303030303 0.021408717616 142% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.013468013468 0.011925033212 113% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1703.0 1933.35771543 88% => OK
No of words: 282.0 316.048096192 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.0390070922 6.12580529183 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20517956788 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.397163120567 0.374742101984 106% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.251773049645 0.28420135186 89% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.170212765957 0.203846283523 84% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.141843971631 0.137316102897 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75279875963 2.80594681477 98% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.037074148 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549645390071 0.56093040696 98% => OK
Word variations: 55.9599846871 60.7387585426 92% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0891783567 68% => OK
Sentence length: 25.6363636364 20.7743622355 123% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5020234732 49.517814964 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.818181818 127.492653851 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6363636364 20.7743622355 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.909090909091 0.814263465372 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 50.8136686009 49.1944974215 103% => OK
Elegance: 1.60810810811 1.69124875643 95% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.399230499515 0.332605444948 120% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.129589423334 0.102741220458 126% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0519602243633 0.0668466124924 78% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.600205149565 0.534860350844 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.121856033874 0.148594505496 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163763667002 0.134430193775 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0987439683229 0.0742795772207 133% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.269407375807 0.324371583561 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0441422538969 0.0638462369009 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263074542741 0.228012699653 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0884635709618 0.058150111329 152% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41683366733 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 8.0 10.4468937876 77% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.