Some People Say That Holding Huge International Events Is A Great Advantage For A Country , While Others Say That This Is A Costly Mistake . Evaluate Both Os These Viewpoints And Give Your Opinion

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Some People Say That Holding Huge International Events Is A Great Advantage For A Country , While Others Say That This Is A Costly Mistake . Evaluate Both Os These Viewpoints And Give Your Opinion

For setting up enormous wolrdwide events , it is believed that this will bring a large number of merits or a lot of drawbacks for a nation. Although I accept that this trend can have some effective strengths , I would argue that its issues are substantial larger.

On the one hand , I disagree with this view of point about country should arranging transnational meetings . One of the most major problems of this could be that it will cost tons of money , In other words , country have to spend budget on transportations , facilities , hotels which are used for serving variety guests from several nations . As a result , those finances could be invested in other sectors such as infrastructure , medicine , education that will be an immense support for nation's individuals . Additionally , transnational meetings might waste of time and be not very sure to bring benefits. My brother , who works for the government , attended an national conference . He said that it was last for a week , while the president of Vietnam couldn't bargain or have great contracts with other nations .

On the other hand , organizing worldwide meeting may have some strenghts , especially show the country power . What i mean by this could be that for example other nations might understand about economic , companies , military of Vietnam , so they might consider Vietnam as a partner who they can cooperate with , seize an oppoturnity to build their company agencies as well as recruit employees . Last but not least , it can enhance national friendship that not only they assist our country when we need most but also develop a lot of progress in sciences and technology .

In conclusion , I think that organizing transnational conferences might contain several major problems , whereas it may include few possitive effects .

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, may, so, well, whereas, while, for example, i mean, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, in other words, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17993079585 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88466791737 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608996539792 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.8763278233 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.75 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0833333333 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8333333333 7.06120827912 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 36.0 5.01903807615 717% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139395684988 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537604323548 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359029929559 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.07697962213 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472788823871 0.056905535591 83% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.