Some people say job satisfaction is more important than job security, othersthink people cannot always enjoy their jobs. So, having a permanent job ismore important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Essay topics:

Some people say job satisfaction is more important than job security, others
think people cannot always enjoy their jobs. So, having a permanent job is
more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

That people should pursue the job satisfaction of job security has controversial. Several people believe that finding a sense of job satisfaction is more meaning to people's lives than taking a job safety. Others assume that having a stable career is the most essential matter. This essay will discuss both views.

To begin with, there are some reasons for choosing job satisfaction rather than job security. First and foremost, job satisfaction inspire people to work better. For example, if you work in a good working environment with satisfaction about salaries, positions or promotion chances, you will feel comfortable to finish every tasks well, thus the productivity of company will increase. It is seen clearly that working under an unmotivated circumstance bring workers unhappiness and depression. In addition, working in conditions which you get on well with colleagues and manager will help you gain achievements smoothly and easily. You also have a range of skills and experience when you finish the work.

However, some people think that it is impossible to always enjoy their work, so securing a job safety is more important. Firstly, having a permanent job make their lives more stable. Due to the fact that if they are experienced staffs, they will have more opportunities to promote and raise their salaries. This makes their standard lives more better. Moreover, each job has pros and cons so it is too hard to find a perfect job, people need to adapt to different working environment.

In conclusion, although having a stable job is necessary, i strongly believe that people should secure a work which they feel sense of job satisfaction since it is key for people to finish the assignments well and have a good condition to develop themselves.

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Average: 8.7 (3 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 166, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'people'.
Suggestion: people
... of job satisfaction is more meaning to peoples lives than taking a job safety. Others ...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 52, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to job'
Suggestion: to job
...th, there are some reasons for choosing job satisfaction rather than job security. ...
^^^
Line 5, column 340, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
...laries. This makes their standard lives more better. Moreover, each job has pros and cons s...
^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13494809689 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83970702998 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557093425606 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.3068057241 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.75 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0625 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1875 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.39190866676 0.244688304435 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151909450293 0.084324248473 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124715912311 0.0667982634062 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.27065483213 0.151304729494 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100204299843 0.056905535591 176% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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