Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country Others say that there are not the only reasons why someone should learn foreign language Discuss both these views and give your own

Essay topics:

Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that there are not the only reasons why someone should learn foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

A section of society thought that the primary reason behind to other regions' language is work or visit that country. While, other argue that there are many other points to learn foreign language. In the course of the essay, I will discuss both sides viewpoints.

On the one hand, the majority of individuals are go to other country for work and treval for other needs. Due to this they learn other language because without understanding of their way of communication is hard to do anything. If the communication is happened between them then their main task will not achieve because most of the people there is not able to understand their language. If person goes their for short term or one maybe they can use translator but for long term the only thing which solve this communication is learn that language.

On the other hand, other problems or interests also force to learn and able to understand other language. Many people have habits to learn other culture, it also needs better grip on that language. Number of people learn this for learning process and decrease their dependence on others. In addition, the knowledge was in a region to absorb other regions research that language is a main tool of this understanding.

In conclusion, mainly people learn language for work and travel to that country however number of people learn for other purposes. In my opinion, learning a foreign way of understanding and communicating to each other is not have behind reason only for work. However, it also had various hidden reasons.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 70, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'regions'' or 'region's'?
Suggestion: regions'; region's
...that the primary reason behind to other regions language is work or visit that country....
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Line 1, column 118, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...language is work or visit that country. While, other argue that there are many other ...
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Line 3, column 50, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'gone'.
Suggestion: gone
...e hand, the majority of individuals are go to other country for work and treval fo...
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Line 3, column 528, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'learned', 'learnt'.
Suggestion: learned; learnt
...thing which solve this communication is learn that language. On the other hand, ot...
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Line 5, column 59, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'learning'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'force' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: learning
... other problems or interests also force to learn and able to understand other language. ...
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Line 7, column 132, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ber of people learn for other purposes. In my opinion, learning a foreign way of u...
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Line 7, column 226, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
... and communicating to each other is not have behind reason only for work. However, i...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, then, while, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1281.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90804597701 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61518882256 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486590038314 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.7971889401 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6428571429 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331226015132 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125976340657 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0875475321218 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238246483833 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0925968985171 0.056905535591 163% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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