Some people say that a person’s success depends on his/her upbringing by parents. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion and examples from your own experience.
Being successful is an internal trend of every individual people. While, some believe succession cannot be gained while you have your parents support, others discuss that everybody can succeed without any aid. This essay will advocate the attitude of people`s progression is independent of one`s background.
Firstly, There are plenty of prominent in the word who came from a disadvantaged background while they did numerous outstanding procedure and there was nobody to back them up. Molana, a famous Iranian poet, is a salient example. He was from poor family, however, his reputation of poetry is spread in all over the word. Also, many rich people come from very poor family and by their own progression, they reach the wealth. Thus, it is obvious that succession, whether is an academic acquaintance or monetary purpose, can gain without any help or rich background.
Although, there is no guarantee that each person who born with a silver spoon in the mouth can be a successful person. There is a majority of the rich people who lose all their parents possession in the gamble. From this point of a view, it is clear that progression is something in the genes not in money or possession.
After looking at above, it is distinctive that each person is able to be succeed without considering the background, although it may take longer in the poor family but, it is not the impossible fact.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'all over the world' (=globally)?
Suggestion: all over the world
..., his reputation of poetry is spread in all over the word. Also, many rich people come from very ...
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Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...in without any help or rich background. Although, there is no guarantee that each person...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n without any help or rich background. Although, there is no guarantee that eac...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, look, may, so, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1176.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98305084746 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80825771694 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627118644068 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.779556425 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165452431354 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537716984111 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404971932848 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0921397274124 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533982458976 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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