Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In some part of societies might believe that the future does not parallel to their academic records, and others might assume that there is a one-to-one relationship between study and success. The first group tends to give freedom to a student to choose their study on what they want to seek without worrying about what the next will be. In the other hand, the second argument might inhibit student to decide unrelated-useful subject.
The first group I like to call them unparalleled believers. They might think that students have always their own characteristic, therefore we cannot push them to conduct a study that they cannot cope with it. The future always speaks with NATURAL way. We cannot concrete the destiny only with academic background. Some pupils could be master in communication, and others might conceive them as wasting ability. That is could be mean that linguistics students cannot deal with our planet problems, as such, climate changes, travelling to the neighborhood planet. If that so be our vital problem, then how about the extinct language and the other problem related to languages. In fact, Linguists may become pioneers to creating AI (artificial intelligence) project because of problem with natural language. If they think communication subject is useless lesson the AI might be just a dream.
The parallel believers, The second group I might call them, tend to connect the life achievement with the educational background. In that way, we have to choose properly on subject that is matter much to human problem history. The software programmer and engineer are some sorts of convincing job. Creating the visual program and joint it with the GLASSES are the phenomenal achievement that can help the trouble-eye persons to remote clearly on their sight problem.
Both views are some way having equal advantages. The IT (Informational technology) programmer and engineer may become reliable job today, but we cannot underestimate the other occupation due to human problems are not simple but complex.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'it'?
Suggestion: it
... conceive them as wasting ability. That is could be mean that linguistics students...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...cause of problem with natural language. If they think communication subject is use...
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'The' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: The; IT
...s are some way having equal advantages. The IT Informational technology programmer and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, so, then, therefore, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1702.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20489296636 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78683053842 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559633027523 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.188664863 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5555555556 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1666666667 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16666666667 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215790963106 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649817615041 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05558510849 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119303991895 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0771130829967 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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