Some folks believe that undergraduates of higher institutions ought to pursue their desired courses whereas others are of the notion that they should be limited to subjects of future relevance like modern technology and science. While it is good for a nation to prepare for the future, I believe it is also paramount to consider one's passion and choice as first place because it brings more productivity and self satisfaction.
One good reason why students should be given the freedom to choose their subjects is that it promotes creativity. Studies have shown that when an individual engages in activities they enjoy, it leads to discovery of their talents. They also work with ease and do not need to exert more time and energy in learning it. Thus, resulting in increased productivity. For instance, a talented seamstress' work is always more outstanding than someone who was forced to learn the work.
Another point to consider in letting scholars decide their course of choice is that it confers a sense of fulfillment. Similarly, skills combined with passion naturally becomes a way of life. In contrast, learning and working without interest becomes burdensome. For example, a waitress who loves to smile enthusiastically will always attract more customers.
Admittedly, enforcing students to embark on trending disciplines with the future in view helps to prepare the universe for tomorrow. The field of molecular biology and genetic engineering can create a biological weapon to safeguard the country for security purposes is new and needs more hands. If people are not there to fill these gaps, it may be disastrous. However, rather than mandating students, interested candidates should be given admission. Furthermore, the government should create awareness aimed at enlightening the populace about the importance of the much needed courses which will definitely make some to consider these areas instead of making it compulsory.
In conclusion, although it is important for professional to delve into much needed specialties, permitting everyone to consider their course of passion can not be overemphasized for any country who has the interest of her citizens at heart.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 330, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...elieve it is also paramount to consider ones passion and choice as first place becau...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, may, similarly, so, thus, whereas, while, as for, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1849.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35942028986 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94795006366 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602898550725 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 582.3 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5699118219 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.764705882 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2941176471 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35294117647 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208390945044 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609334017732 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0706668723143 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105014813959 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0713803564501 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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