Whether, so many countries need scientist, engineers, doctors does not mean student should be force into undeserved science and technology subjects. We should know that students are the leaders of tomorrow, and they deserve the right part to good leadership. For this reason do we think that student should study whatever they like or should they be allowed to study subjects that will be useful to the society?
In my opinion student learn better if they choose their subject themselves which open the platform for better understanding, good performance and obedient to all instruction in class. Which can lead to excelling and good grades that also leads to good career and better job prospect. For instance, humans put in more effort to what they love and care about. Though, it is understanding that the society we live in need more research students and workers that can help in the development of the society.
However, many student are so confuse on the right part to success and need support from their course coordinator. If this student are smart and intelligent in science related field then the university should allowed them to do subject that will be beneficial to them and to the society.
Besides, there is detrimental effect when university chooses subjects for students. One of the effect of this is lack of concentration in class, that will make the student to fail constantly and will never pass the subject.
In conclusion, student should be allowed to make their own choice when it comes to studying or the university can pick a student for them to will better the society and better the student.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 95, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'forced'?
Suggestion: forced
...doctors does not mean student should be force into undeserved science and technology ...
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Line 2, column 30, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to better', 'to well'
Suggestion: to better; to well
...society? In my opinion student learn better if they choose their subject themselves...
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Line 2, column 371, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...at they love and care about. Though, it is understanding that the society we live in need more r...
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Line 3, column 11, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun student seems to be countable; consider using: 'many students'.
Suggestion: many students
... development of the society. However, many student are so confuse on the right part to suc...
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Line 3, column 288, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... beneficial to them and to the society. Besides, there is detrimental effect whe...
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Line 4, column 75, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ect when university chooses subjects for students. One of the effect of this is l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, so, then, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1350.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94505494505 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62075560998 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512820512821 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4196223057 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.5 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.379201045867 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138390620374 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.150139217237 0.0667982634062 225% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214726047515 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136132978272 0.056905535591 239% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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