Some people think that children should learn to paint or draw at school. Others believe it is just a waste of time. Discuss both views and give your own opinion and example
People have different views about whether school curriculums should involve art-based activities such as painting and drawing. While some people are in favor of this idea, I reckon that such activities are not necessary owing to its time-wasting nature.
On the one hand, there are several reasons to believe that incorporating artistic requirement into school curriculums can bring about benefits to children. Firstly, activities such as drawing and painting help foster children’s creativity and imagination, which cultivates their early mindset development. Secondly, by taking part in activities requiring group effforts such as drawing and painting, children would be exposed to develop teamwork spirit and sense of community, which is necessary and crucial. Thirdly, apart from tedious and monotonous academic lessons such as literature and mathematic, art serves as a relaxing subject in which pupils can relieve stress after long-hour studying since concentration is no longer required.
On the other hand, I hold the perspective that teaching children artistic subjects appears to be time-wasting and unnecessary. Obviously, not all children possess talents and desires in painting and drawing. Thus, should they compelled to do things they are not fond of, undesirable impacts such as resentment and negative attitudes towards schooling is inevitable. School boys, for instance, are usually active and hence prefer playing sports such as football rather than sitting still to complete a piece of art. Furthermore, parents expect their children to be imparted academic knowledge such as literature and mathematic rather than painting and drawing in which teachers are not required and can be effortlessly conducted at home as a pastime.
In conclusion, artistic subjects such as painting and drawing, albeit holding certain benefits, should not be made compulsory as part of school curriculum. Rather, academic subjects should be the focal requirement of an education.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly, thus, while, apart from, for instance, i reckon, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1700.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.74324324324 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96340598269 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601351351351 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9539620928 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.769230769 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7692307692 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.4615384615 7.06120827912 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194398448207 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0757998361933 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420482973739 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126995441288 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437702300916 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.31 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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